Lydia Davis Project: Visit to Her Husband
by Nathan J
(based on Lydia Davis’ short story ‘Visit to Her Husband’)
Speech so sudden and
Sullen from the mouths of
Both him and her.
They once shared love.
Now they share unfulfilled
Discussion after discussion,
Incomplete and insincere.
This final conversations finds
Itself interrupted by overlapping
Indecisions and reversed by
Faltering revisions.
Now with this marriage
Finally over, maybe
They can start all
Over again.
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